Story Telling

I think one of the things I really need to start working on is story telling in my images.
Sometimes, I am just unable to do this in one image.

Below is an example of telling a story with three images.
These pictures were taken at the John Hancock Building in Chicago.

Few things I am trying to do with these images, the first one is using leading lines to bring you up the building.
The second image I am trying to show Katie's reaction to the size of the building, and the third showing how tall it actually is.

Let me know how I did, and what you would change about the images.